Ez így szerintetek jó?

Írtam egy dalszöveget, de nem tudom, hogy nyelvtanilag helyes-e.

It’s too dark in this room to everything be clear-sighted

It’s too late to do anything what I wanted

But now I don’t care anything what you became

But I know nothing will be quite the same

No, I won’t give up and I won’t break down

And if I’ll fall in love again I’ll not stay on the ground

But now there is somebody else to me

And I think he’s better than you

He brings out better thing in me

And with him I will forget you

It’s true that you were a good friend

But you’re living in another land

My love was strong about you

I’m sure I can decide what to do

I’m stronger than before and I’m grateful

Because you made me strong like now I am

Beacause showed me the pain what I can have

But you showed me the hapiness what I can have too

But now there is somebody else to me

And I think he’s better than you

He brings out better thing in me

And with him I will forget you

You were the best thing who I’ve ever known

But I gotta accept that you’re not alone

You have a girlfriend and you’re living 150 miles away

I would be impossible to see you everyday

With a little bit brave

And If I’m wide awake

And If I’m not afraid

I can make a change

But now there is somebody else to me

And I think he’s better than you

He brings out better thing in me

And with him I will forget you