Valaki átnézné ezt a szöveget, van-e benne helyesírási, mondatalkotási hiba? (angol)

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íme a szöveg->The mystic and popular Bermuda-Triagle every time, in the past and in the present employing the researchers. Now, I telling some thing about the Bermuda-Triagle and telling some storyes too. The people began to pay attention when five combat aircraft lost without trace in the Triangle. But whether the the mytic Triagle's Strange storyes are true? And these storyes whether insoluble? And whether the lost ships and planes were just the random accident victims and the five combat airdraft was just random accident too?

I think the first case was that when Kolombus in 1492(Thousand Four Hundred and Ninety-Two) started his American way and the all way he wrote a journal. This journal has a strange part, when he wrote, that he seen a strange flying thing in the sky, and that was bright. When he go to America, he was very close to the Bermuda Triangle.

Now I telling a short story about the five combat aircraft--> One day on 5th in december, in 1945, at fourteen hours and ten minutes, five Avenger types combat aircraft go to a training flight. They said on the radio, that the weather is soo good and the flying is perfect. But after that they anxiously asked for help.The last call was at Seventeen hours and four minutes. After two hours followed them to a rescue aircraft what was lost too. In our history has a lot of case about the Bermuda-Triagle, for example in august, 1840 when the Rosalie French merchant ship missing, or in december in 1872 a British merchant ship the Mary Celeste missing. Disappeared Miramon from the Italian merchant ship in 1884 and the El Caribe cargo ship on 15th in october 1971 and the Elizabeth cargo ship on 5th april in 1971. and disappered a lot of ship and a lot of plane in the all history. But recently we don't hear such storyes and it's strange. Or we don't hear such storyes, becouse maybe every mystic story are simple random and the place's weather make the cases. Many people thinking, that the bermuda-triagle is the aliens place, and the aliens kidnap the people..maybe...Every people has his own explanation of things. I trust upon you that what you think. You can belive in the aliens, you can belive in the weather, you can belive in the Gulf Stream or the Storms,or gas bubbles.. You can decide.

14/L