Hogy tudnám leírni angolul?

Úgy, hogy lefordítod angolra és az angol szavakat írod le. Ilyen egyszerű. De gondolom nem megy az angolra történő fordítás. Talán meg kellene tanulni angolul, hogyha érvényesülni akarsz.

"Hi. I got the product. The display has broken and I can't turn it on. You should have put it into a box, not an envelope! I wouldn't like to give a negative rating, if I get my money back, my rating will be positive."

Hi,

I received the product, but the screen is broken and when I try to switch it on it doesnt operate. You should have sent it in box instead of an envelope. I wouldnt like to give you a negative evaluation, so if I get my money back I will give you a positive evaluation. Thank you.