Angol versemet átnézné valaki? Nyelvtani hibák?

You are in an open maze,

can't recall your mother's face.

You think this is your best phase,

Brother, you lost the race.

You love people by rnandom,

Dont know where they were came from.

But they fade away like a phantom,

And you will be adandoned.

You haven't got a place to go,

You turned to wrong a long ago.

Oh boy, you are dont know,

But you are your greatest foe.

Your soul is need a guide,

To help you in this fight.

To show you what is right,

If you can stay alive.

Még eléggé nyers verzió, a szótagszámok sem egyeznek.

A nyelvtani, részében nem vagyok biztos, ha valaki átnézné azt megköszönném.