Ki tudná valaki javítani a nyelvtani hibákat?

Bocs nem vettem észre hogy nem raktam ki

It’s happened a long time ago. I don’t like to remember for this but it goes with me for a life. It started on a bad day when I got sack from my workplace and I broke up with my girlfriend. I went into a disco and I wanted to drink, to forget everything what happend to me. I drank three coctails one by one. I felt I am brave, no one can hurt me again. I wanted to go out to the toilet when someone leaned against to me. The adrenalin spread in my veins and I started to hit him. I heard screams in the rooms and I saw his face got to be pale but I didn’t take care of it. Then someone grabbed my arms and took me out from the disco.