Helyes ez a fogalmazás?

I can travel in town lot of ways of travelling.

For example:bus,trolley bus,tram,taxi and underground.

I can get the tickets in bus stop and on the internet.

I can get student reduction it costs about 3450 HUF.

I go to school by suburban train. It takes about 30 minutes.

The fastest way of travelling is underground,because there’s no traffic jam.

The safest way of travelling is plane,because accidents happen rarely.But I have never travelled in plane.

The most comfortable way of travelling is train,because I can read book and also have a nap.

The buses are od,cramped and smelly. I would like new and spacious buses. The trams are new,but cramped.

My favorite way of travelling is train.

Cars are fast,comfortable,reliable and clean. I can start my journey whenever I want to. I can stop for a rest. The bad thing is, petrol is expensive and causes air pollution. And traffic jams means problem, it can cause accidents.

Meg ki lehetne egesziteni sok dologgal, hogy szebb legyen a fogalmazas, de igy nyelvtanilag helyes.

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way of travelling

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get around

I can travel within the town by a lot of different ways.

For example: by bus,trolley bus,tram,taxi and the underground.

I can buy tickets at bus stops and via the internet.

I can get student concession as well.

It costs about 3450 HUF.

I go to school by a suburban train. Travel time takes about 30 minutes.

The fastest way of travelling is underground,because There is no traffic jam.

The safest way of travelling is by plane,because accidents happen rarely.But I have never travelled by plane.

The most comfortable way of travelling is by train,because I can read a book, while on board and I can also have a nap.

The buses are crowded and smelly. I would prefer new and spacious buses.The trams are new, but also over crowded. .

My favorite way of travelling is by a train.

Cars are fast,comfortable,reliable and clean.I can start my journey when I want.I can stop for a rest, although petrol is expensive and bad for the environment. Traffic jams can be a problem too.

A vehicle can cause accidents and very expensive to keep.

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