Fogalmazás. Valaki kijavítaná? (angol)

I was born in south Hungary in Baranya region. I spend my childhood in **** and then when I was nine years old we moved to ****. This is a small urban area in the south part of the country. The place where I grew up is a beautiful urban area and is really a nice place to live in. It is situated besides a river called Duna and there are a lots of open spaces, corn fields, wheat fields there. The green enviroment, fresh air, comfortable weather, scenic beauty and the simple life of people make it an ideal place. The modern facilities like internet, satellite connection, theatre, library etc. are present there and yet one can stay close to nature there. The area is pollution free, quiet and has some renowned educational institutes.