Leellenőrzitek, hogy van-e hiba az angol fogalmazásomban?
Yesterday I got up at 6 o'clock, because my bus arrived at 7 o'clock. When I was going to school I met with my friends. They are specialized in Biology and Chemistry. That they I had got eight lessons and a Chemistry study group. The lunchtime was in the sixth lesson. When I was going to home I went to a stationery. In my home I ate fish and rice for dinner. While I was studying, the doorbell rang. It was my mum. She hadn't got keys, because she left them. She was gardening while I was reading a book. In 9 o'clock I had a shower, brushed my teeth and I went to bed.
On Sunday I woke up late, so I didn't have breakfast. I ate peas-soup, fried chicken and chips. I were reading books and watching TV all day. In the afternoon relations came to ours and they stayed to evening. I went to bed at 9 o'clock, but I couldn't sleep because there were a moskitoo in my room.
"That they I had got..." - inkább "day" nem? :D Először nem értettem a mondatot, aztán kiolvastam hangosan és leesett.
"In my home I ate..." - at home. Otthon eszel, nem "az otthonodban".
"She hadn't got keys..." - nem kapott kulcsokat??? Helyesen: She didn't have her keys"
"I had a shower..." - szerintem a kifejezés a take a shower, de ebben nem vagyok biztos.
"On Sunday I woke up late, so I didn't have breakfast." - Szerintem On Sunday I had woken up late, so I didn't have breakfast. A felkelés előbb történt és van ok-okozati összefüggés, ezért én Past Perfectet használnék.
"I were reading books..." - I was
"In the afternoon relations..." - ha a rokonokra gondolsz, én eddig csak a "relative" szót hallottam rá. Lehet, hogy jó, nekem idegen.
"I went to bed at 9 o'clock, but I couldn't sleep..." - szerintem megint Past Perfect. I had gone to bed at 9...
"there were a..." - there was
"moskitoo" - mosquito
ja, egyet kihagytam:
"When I was going to home..." - nem kell to. A ki fejezés "to go home - hazamenni". When I was going home.
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