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Dear Editor,

I am writing to express my opinion about an article that I read in your newspaper. I have some idea about using cell phones in school.

I do not think we should prohibit students from bringing cell phones to school and confiscate these necessity devices. Nowadays everybody have and use these communication devices. The main problem is when young boys between 6 and 10 years old use their high cost phones for playing games on it. I can not agree whit banning phones from school because above at a certain age in some way they just smug it into the school. Think of the commuters, where can they store their phones in safe, because they must have a cell phone with them? We should not forbid bringing cell phones to school. The schools can not afford to check every single person’s bags and clothes. We should forbid it to use phones on lessons. It has some advantages and disadvantages of course.

Advantages are for example: you always know the time when you have to go back in the classroom; you can take a photo about your friend’s copy book if you were not at school. You can be called for instance by your mother about where you are. And of course it gives a sense of safety. You can call the ambulance if you get hurt or you see an accident. I think the disadvantages are less, than the advantages. I think there is just one, using it on a lesson instead of learning or writing but it can be prevented by the teachers.

In short, although the cell phones have disadvantages, but it has much more advantages. I think these devices are one of the most necessity things in our developing life.

Yours faithfully,