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It was summer, when the sun shone and I didn't want to woke up, because I was so tired. My mother screamed "Jenna, wake up, its nine o'clock in the morning". I was so angry, so do you know when someone wants to sleep and her mother doesnt let it, it's make me angry. I remember, I said " Mom, please today is my birthday, and it is summertime, I want to sleep. " Probably it wasn't a good idea, my mother never understand me, I know it sad. Finally I woke up and I went down in the kitchen, honeslty I was lustless, but my mother didn't care about it. She just said for me " Happy Birthday my dear " and said, what is today the chore. It was so nice, nobody didn't care about my day. It was sad, I just went and started to clean up in the bathroom, and in the meantime I heard that my mom screamed " Jenma have you finished it? " I bethought that "Yes mom, I am so rash then a superwomen" But it wasn't a good answer for her question, so I just said " Five minute " While I had cleaned up the bathroom I was thinking that everybody simulationed it, and initially they wanted to suprise me. Oh, No, it was wrong, it would have benn fairy, but sometime I was a dreamer. It was perfect, because on my day I have done my homework. Did not matter, laterI finished the bathroom, and I started to dusted my room. In my rom I had a little door, and it was my hide-out, and i realy wanted to fade-out but I couldn't. I went down, and I declared that I finished, and I went to reade a book in my room, in peaceful.



Koszonom!!!

Oh, I forgot, my mom cooked my birthday cake in the evening, and it was so yummy. I wonder whether all birthday it will be like this?



2013. nov. 28. 12:32
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Ismered a ezt az oldalt?

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Pont neked találták ki erre a célra! :)

Persze biztos járnak erre is jó angolosok, de ott nagyobb valószínűséggel javítja ki az írásod egy angol anyanyelvű.

2013. nov. 29. 00:59
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