Értelmileg, nyelvtanilag helyes ez a szöveg?

Gondolom csak eliràs, de màs hibát nem látok:arent aposztroffal, becouse helyett because.

Viszont nem vagyok jó angolos, ne vedd tutira.

There are some little and some older children. ::

There are some young and some older children.

And there is an instuctor teach us skiing. ::

And there is an instructor to teach us how to ski.

I think they arent beginner becouse they are looks so adroit. ::

I think they are not beginners because they seem so adroit.

It seems to be such a good sport.

I have never been skiing but I heard a lot about it. ::

I have never been skiing but I have heard a lot about it.

I really want to try it but nobody can in my family. ::

I really want to try it but nobody can ski in my family.

There is(!) some little and older children. And there is an instuctor who(!) teaches skiing to us(!). I think they aren't beginners(!) because(!) they looks(!) so adroit. It seems like(!) so good sport. I have never tried to ski but I heard a lot about it. I really want to try it but nobody can in my family.

Some, any, no, every mindig E/3 ragozás.

I have never tried to ski(!) but I heard a lot about it. I really want to try it but nobody can ski(!) in my family.

Bocs itt lemaradt.