Le tudja ezt a rövid szöveget valaki fordítani angolra?

I really enjoyed the summer holidays, it was full of experiences. We went to the Black Sea in Bulgaria where I learnt to swim. I had a great time there. When I was at home, I helped my mum. Because of the warm weather I watered the flowers and vegetables a lot. I often looked after my cousin, Szidi, with whom I played a lot. I spent the last days of the holiday relaxing at my grandmother's. The holidays were full of experiences but they went by very fast.

Nem biztos, hogy teljesen jó, most ennyire tellett.

Our summer holiday was exciting and very impressive. We were at the Black Sea in Bulgaria with my family where I had the opportunity to learn how to swim. I had an awesome time there.

When we returned I helped Mom in the chores. We had to water the flowers and the vegetables in our garden a lot because of the hot weather. I took care of Cid my sister in law, we also played a lot together. I spent the last days of my holiday at grandma where I had time for laying back and relax.

Az első válaszoló vagyok:

A második válaszoló verziója is jó, csak ha azt választod, vigyázz, hogy ne sister-in-law-t írj a cousin helyett, mert az sógornőt jelent.