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My dream village

In the ninja world are five big and four small country. Land of Fire,Land of Wind, Land of Water, Land of Earth, Land of Lightning, Land of Rain, Land of Grass, Land of the Waterfall, Land of Sound. Leaf Village(Konoha)is the Country of Fire's center. Behind the village is a mountain with the Hokages Faces (Hokages are the leader of Konoha).In the mountain is the anbu headquarters./They are the police, they hunt the dangerous ninjas/. the village has so far five hokages. The 5th hokage is Tsunade.Konoha has a big wall around the village and a gate. The hokage has an office (Hokage's Office). Konoha has a hospital. Here work the medical ninjas and the hokage because she is a medical ninja also.

Konoha has a several famous place: Hot spring is a good place (annak?), who long to relax.A young ninja Naruto has a favourite place in Konoha: The Ichiraku Ramen Shop. Next to the Hokage's office is the academy where the genins(ninja rank) learn. When the genins are enough strong, then they have a exam. The 1st round is a written exam. They can in the 2nd round with each other fight in the Forest of Death and they have one roll (earth or sky), but they must the other roll get (with fight). The Forest of Death is next to the village. Konoha has a Chunin Exam Stadium, here is the 3rd round. In the village is many clan and they have a seperate street e.g.: the utmost clans are: Uchiha, Hyuuga, Akimichi etc. The village has a river .Konoha Memorial is the stone where the dead heroes name’s are not down.