Hogy van angolul ez a pár mondat?

Bocsi, de szerintem alapfokú angollal esélytelen vagy, és a fogalmazásodtól sem dobtam hanyatt magam...

Inkább idén feküdj rá az angolra, és kimész jövőre...

I've looked after my sisters/&brothers and my cousins a lot. I can cook too, because I'm learning hosting.

I love reading, listening to music, travelling and meeting new things.

I love children very much and I can get on well with them (get on well=jól kijönni valakivel, de szinte ugyanaz). Unfortunately I can just stay for the summer because I'm going to school from September.

Dear family!

I'm an eighteen-year-old young girl and I'd like to spend the summer in England. I'd like to be more self-sufficient, learning a language, see faraway places, meet an another culture and apart from this I'm crazy about children.

I'll take my GCSE-s in this year (a GCSE(ejtsd:gíszíesszé) az érettségi angol megfelelője, de school-leaving exam-et is mondhatsz, ha úgy tetszik). I'm learning hosting, so I don't have problems with cooking, I love cooking very much.

I'll do the housework too, I'll wash, I'll clean and I'll help the children in homework.

I haven't been an au-pair so far, so it's a real challange for me. I've taken care a lot for little children, for example my brothers/&sisters, the girls/&boys next door, my cousins.

I'd love a nice family whom I require the mutual confidence. It doesn't take me a long time to get accustomed to the new milieu, but unfortunately my English knowledge isn't the best, because I can speak English just in a basic level, my acquaintance helped me to write this letter too.

That's all about me, I hope we can work together soon.

(Lehet, hogy nem hibátlan, de szerintem a legtöbb helyen rendben van.)

Nekem lenne pár változtatásom az előzőhöz:

I've looked after my sisters/&brothers and my cousins a lot. I can cook too, because I'm learning catering.

I love reading, listening to music, travelling and getting to know new things.

I love children very much and I can get on well with them (get on well=jól kijönni valakivel, de szinte ugyanaz). Unfortunately I can just stay for the summer because I'm going to school from September.

Dear family,

I'm an eighteen-year-old young girl and I'd like to spend the summer in England. I'd like to be more self-sufficient, pick up English, visit faraway places, come to know an another culture and apart from this I'm crazy about children.

I'll take my GCSE-s in this year (a GCSE(ejtsd:gíszíesszé) az érettségi angol megfelelője, de school-leaving exam-et is mondhatsz, ha úgy tetszik). I'm learning catering, so I don't have problems with cooking, I love doing it very much.

I'll do the housework too, I'll wash, I'll clean up and I'll help the children in homework.

I haven't been an au-pair so far, so it's a real challange for me. I've taken care a lot for little children, for example my brothers/&sisters, the girls/&boys next door, my cousins.

I'd love a nice family of whom I expect mutual confidence. It doesn't take me a long time to get accustomed to a new milieu, but unfortunately my English knowledge isn't the best, because I can speak English just in a basic level, my acquaintance helped me to write this letter too.

That's all about me, I hope we can work together soon.