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Dear Susie,

I've read your letter and I think I can help you. Don't worry, your problem is not unusual.

Do you think only slim girls have boyfriends? No! It's a silly idea bot you should decide what is more important. Live your general life overweightly or be slim and go out with boys? I think the second is better except that it's much more healthier.

Firstly, you have to make a resolution to lose weight. If you do it, everything will be easier.

You should change your lifestyle. I know the healthy diet is boring and tasteless but it's the solution for your problem. Eat a lot of vegetables, fruits and some chicken or turkey but don't eat bread because it's very fattening.

You should do some sports too. To my guess jogging would be the best to begin. It isn't straining but cheap. I wish you a successful slimming diet and an awesome boy.

I hope I could help you with my advice.