Ez így jó? (angol fogalmazás nyaralásról)

Lake Balaton

apartment

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Miért mentél át múlt időbe? Ha átváltasz az idei nyaralásra, akkor beszúrhattad volna, hogy This year we went...

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Egyébként jó. Mivel lehetne kiegészíteni?

One night I met a very hot girl...

".In the evenings we walked in the city and on the beach. We bought some gifts."

Ez értelmesebb.

jó ez nekem most újra kell mert csak egy adott nyaralásról írhatsz nem az egész nyaradról és ehhez nemtok mit hozzá fűzni.. (az elejét kiegészítettem 1 mondtattal de ígyis csak 95 szó és a tanárnak 150 kell)

Vacations are the best time to relax and enjoy and I eagerly wait for my summer vacations every year. I usually spend my holidays with my family. We usually go to the coast of the Balaton where we rent a small apartmant in Balatonlelle. We spend there two weeks every year. We went by car. We had a lot of swimming, sunbathing and sailing there.In the evenings we walked in the city and on the beach and bought gifts.The weather was hot and sunny, but sometimes it was cloudy. It was an enjoyable holiday.

Ezzel egészítettem még ki nem érdekel hogy lebasz a tanár hogy nem ez a feladat csak sztem rosz lett

Vacations are the best time to relax and enjoy and I eagerly wait for my summer vacations every year. I usually spend my holidays with my family. We usually go to the coast of the Balaton where we rent a small apartmant in Balatonlelle. We spend there two weeks every year. We went by car. We had a lot of swimming, sunbathing and sailing there. I read my favourite book on the beach. I like read to science fiction and fantasy, because I can travel to places in my mind where I can not go in reality. (For example I can 'travel' planets or villages from the Middle Ages.) I can get to know some characters that I can not meet in my life, for example witches, vampires, because they do not exist in reality. Besides, I can experience dangerous situations without having to fear the danger. I like to read science fiction and fantasy. In the evenings we walked in the city and on the beach and bought gifts.The weather was hot and sunny, but sometimes it was cloudy. It was an enjoyable holiday.