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Japan is older and older, but it isn’t wrong.

Few men is born in Japan, but old men is too much. It is alarming, that inhabitants of Japan ease down with 250000 men in 2013. This tendency is fluent from 2008. It seems, that the country is waning slowly. It is a problem, what the change of population clauses. Average age is 46 years-this is world record. Quarter of inhabitants are older, than 65 years old. Few children is born. Immigrant are in other countries, so the population doesn’t ease down, but Japan is isolated. They are a very wrong news, because it clauses big ballast in economy. The small proportion of the population depend on men, who work. Adults need not pay lot of money for education, because the number of childrens is very short. The Japanese are very healty and they need not pay lot of money for health care. The living-space of Japanese are continually growing. The quality of their life get better and better. They use fewer resource.

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2014. jan. 13. 20:50

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Japan is older and older, but it isn’t wrong.

Few men is born in Japan, but old men is too much. It is alarming, that inhabitants of Japan ease down with 250000 men in 2013. This tendency is flowing from 2008. It seems, that the country is waning slowly. It is a problem, what the change of population clauses. Average age is 46 years-this is world record. Quarter of inhabitants are older, than 65 years old. Few children is born. Immigrant are in other countries, so the population doesn’t ease down, but Japan is isolated. They are a very wrong news, because it clauses big ballast in economy. The small proportion of the population depend on men, who work. Adults need not pay lot of money for education, because the number of children is very short. The Japanese are very healthy and they need not pay lot of money for health care. The living-space of Japanese are continually growing. The quality of their life get better and better. They use less resource. This tendency is not only is Japan, also in Russia, in Romania and in Hungary. Hans Rosling said the world had reached aces of children’s number. A woman give birth to averagely 2,5 children. If this tendency continue, the population will ease down.

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