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My favourite thing is a plush horse.
It's name is Stikli.
My friend was made me for last christmas.
Stikli not compered a real horse.
Stikli have got too long legs and big head.
It colour is brown.
Very good to sleep with it, because it have get soft and big.
I love because it sweet and ugly and I got my best friend.
I always sleep with it.
Sometimes when i get up that Stikli on the floor.
This time I take up and each continue.
Stikli is my favourite thing.
My favourite object is a plush(y) horse.
It's name is Stikli.
My friend made it for me last Christmas.
Stikli cannot be compared with a real horse.
Stikli has got very long legs and a big head.
It's colour is brown.
It is very comfortable to sleep with it, because
it is big and soft.
I love this toy because it is sweet and ugly and
my best friend.
I always sleep with it.
Sometimes when I get up Stikli lies on the floor.
I take Stikli up and go on sleeping.
Stikli is my favourite object.
+1 hibát mindenképp javíts még ki:
its name, its colour (nincs aposztróf)
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