Mik a hibáim az angol fogalmazásban?

The very first day they heard SUCH A terrible noise that they COULDN'T hear EACH OTHER'S voice. There was an airport nearby.Later that day he wanted to open the door, but the door handle was broken. During the night they couldn't sleep because the rain WAS FLOWING into the room SO THERE WAS WATER everywhere on the floor. The next morning they realised that the kitchen GOT FLOODED AS WELL. They couldn't sit down and eat breakfast. ThE water tap in the kitchen BROKE DOWN.

Eddig relatíve jó, a végét én így írnám:

They found out why the house was so cheap so they decided to find a new one in a peaceful place. A few days later they moved out and advertised the house for sale. What a nightmare!