Szerintetek jól van meg fogalmazva az angol házim?
In my other hobby is always a lot of things I like to do ... My favourites are fotography, swimming and sleeping. I take pictures of nature and animals. Sometimes I go to sopron in the forest. There I go for a walk and during I take uncommon and interesting photos. Long ago I went orderly swim because in my preschool age all the people see talent to swim. But it was not interesting so i stopped it. But to this date I like to went swim. But only alone in silenc. For the sleep I must not speak because it can all the people its not a uncommon thing. really I like in my hobbis its peace.
Angol házim. :D arról kell írni hogy mi a hobbim és hát nem vagyok benne biztos hogy jól van meg fogalmazva valaki át nézné és ki javítaná a hibáim? előre is köszönöm :)
válasza:Itt anyanyelvűek javítják ki:
Nem lesz tökéletes, de egy pár javítás:
There are a lot of things that I like doing ... My favourites are fotography, swimming and sleeping. I take pictures of nature and animals. Sometimes I go to sopron to the forest. I go for a walk there and during it/the walk I take uncommon and interesting photos. Long ago I used to go to swim because in preschool all the people saw talent in me. But it was not interesting so i stopped it. But till this date I like going to swim. But only alone in silence. As for sleeping I should not speak about it because all the people can do it, its not an uncommon thing. Really, what I like in my hobbies is peace.
(A végével nem igazán értem, mit akartál mondani.)
válasza:*Sometimes I go to the forest by/near Sopron.
*photography
Amúgy ötös:)
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