Valaki segítene? (bővebben lent)

Valaki segítene kijavítani a hibákat a fogalmazásomba?

Itt a fogalmazás:

My brother decided to celebrate his 26th birthday with a huge and brilliant party. I and my best friend helped to organise for him. It was on a saturday night in 2010. in the greatest club.

Before the party my friends and I had cooked lots of delicious food and a very big cake, cleaned the club and put up a wonderful decorations.

At the party we had to give his some present and play some exciting party games. We had to listen to music then we, dance for the rest of evening and speak about his friends.

Everything was perfect. We laugh a lot and we were very happy and I met some interesting peopla.

Ennyi lenne és lécci segítsetek kijavitani nekem a hibákat.

Előre is köszönöm :)