Aki ért az angolhoz, segítene?

Halloween alkalmából az angol tanárnő megkért minket,h készítsünk egy rövidke fogalmazást egy rémtörténetről amiben egyszerű múlt és folyamatos múlt időt lehet használni.A kérésem az lenne,h segítenétek leellenőrizni a házimat?

Segítségeteket előre is nagyon köszönöm:)

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The doll

A little girl went with her family among the shops and saw a doll in the window which showed two of her fingers.

She asked her parents take her to the doll. they did.The little girl took her doll at home She was very happy for the doll.She put in a box. While she wAs sleeping,

Suddenly, she heard that: "I came out of the box" .

The little girl didn't interested in,she sleeping on. Then she heard this: "here i am next to your bed".

A little bit disturbed, but she slept on. When she heard that "I'm already

next to your pillow " All of sudden she turned on her face and then unfortunately the doll was cutting off her head ....

In the morning, the parents were going into the girl's room when they saw the little girl on the bed with her doll,which showed three of her fingers.