Képleírást kellet írnom, helyes az alábbi angol leírás?

Ruth's friend Mark said that the weather would be great for Ruth's barbecue. When she got up she went to the living room and watched the weather report. After Ruth started to prepare the meal and went to the outside and cooked the food.

Later the guests arrived and everybody spent a good time together. Unfortunately, it started to rain and they had to finsihed barbecue party. She was crying but her friend had a good idea. He said continue the garden party at the restaurant. Ruth again felt happy and they enjoyed this.