Angolosok, valaki leellenőrizné a képleírásom?

A szövegemet kéne átnézni és ha van benne hiba kijavítani , előre is köszönöm szépen!:)

In my opinion the topic of this picture is a party or frendships. Perhaps they are celebrating a special occasion like a birthday. I think they are in a café or maybe a hotel. I guess that they are abot 16-17 years old. In my sure they are friends because they look very relaxed and in my opinion they are happy because all the girl are smiling and laughing. They are drinking café and fizzy drinks. The girl on the left is wearing a red T-shirt , she and the girlin the pink top are sitting on armchairs. The girl in the blue t-shirt has blond hair , she and the girl in yellow t-shirt are sitting on a sofa. In the middle there is a table and on the table there are some drink and the menu. In the background there are 3 people and they are talking each other. I think this place is really friendly.

Nowadays when the teenagers want to relax they go to a party maybe..or a cinema or they are drink something in a café. But i think the parties are not the best program for the young people , because it can be dangerous and a lot of 13-14 years old young girls and boys go to clubs or nightclubs and it's not the best for them.. I don't like going to clubs , so when I'd like to relax i go to the cinema or go out with my friends.