Angol házifeladatom megnéznétek, hogy helyes-e? (A szövegkommentben)

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The first thing I would like to tell you is that nothing is impossible. Not only slim girls have boyfriends.You can see chubby girls have a boyfriend too and they really love each other.You don't have to be unhappy.You don’t have to be like your friends.Because there are a lot of boys who like overweight girls. If you want to be pretty, you don't have to be very very slim.Because everybody likes something else.

But don’t forget, you have to decide what is important for you.The first thing: do you only want a boyfriend or do you want a boyfriend and to lose weight. Nobody can do this instead of you. You can lose weight easily. On the internet you can find a lot of diets.You only have to choose one and do it.I suggest you do some sports, join a football team or something..You should go to the gym.

Can you do it ? This is your decision. Nobody can make it instead of you.How do you feel better?

Do you want to change your lifestyle or not? If you think that you have to change your lifestyle, how do you think you have to it? I hope everithyng will be better.