Valaki jó angolos légyszi segítsen kijavítani?!

-a második mondatban a restaurant előtt van egy "a"

-aquapark előtt "to the"

-aquapark is(külön)

-in july i was visited my grandmother

-was borned

-a new born

-visited

-in the hospital

-weekend and we visited

-classmate (egybe)

-nem wek hanem week (szerintem csak elirtad)

In the summer vacation I was in Sajószentpéter with my cousin for a week. We went watched movies in theater and had dinner in restaurant. I also went to Hajdúszoboszló, to the aquapark with my family, that was fun. I was in Borsodszentgyörgy at my grandmother's place for a week. In July my cousin had born so we visited her in the hospital. We also went to Debrecen for a weekend, cisited Nagy erdő, Nagy templom, etc. On August 1st I went to a camp with my classmate to Dubicsány for a week, it was really cool.

Én így mondanám el ezeket, nem tudom, mennyire hibás, amit írtam, remélem, hogy tudtam segíteni :) By the way: how old are you? What sex are you?