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Dear actress XY,

I have seen all of your movies and I respect you entirely. I would hug you because I love you both as an actress and a human being.

Please send me a picture of you and write “Love XXXX” on the back side. Please also write the actual time so I will know that you thought about me for those few seconds which means a lot to me.

Yours sincerely,

XY

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Egy nagy hulyeseg, de Itt van:

Dear Ms..., I have seen your movies and I am a huge fan of yours.

I would love to give you a heartfelt hug because I love you as a person and as an actress.

I am asking you, please send me a photograph of yourself and on the back of it please inscribe with your own hands, “with love to XY”. Also, please include the exact time at the time of your writing, so this way, I will know you were thinking of me for a few seconds and it means a lot to me.