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Tul sok a yeah. But es and ele nem kell vesszo es nem kezdunk veluk mondatokat. Robot, guys stb-ikre talalj szinonimakat, sok a szoismetles. Amugy tenyleg jo.

Hi everyone! Welcome again to my site. So, let's speak about my favourite indie-horror game. It's called "Five Nights at Freddy's". It's a survival-horror game. In the game, you are a nightguard in a pizzeria, and five killer robots wanna kill you. If you want to survive all the five nights, you need to avoid the killer machines. Check them on the security cameras, and if a robot stands in front of the door, lock it. But be careful! If your power runs out, your room becomes dark, and a flashing bear animatronic will appear in front of you. Yeah, that’s Freddy. Not Krueger. He's Freddy Fazbear, the mascot of this restaurant. The other four are Chica, the yellow chicken, Bonnie, the purple bunny, Foxy, the pirate fox and Golden Freddy (He's Freddy's yellow version). It's not a scary game, but I really love it! It's the first horror game what I ever played. This game was released in 2014, so this year, it's five years old. The FNAF-franchise has six more parts, including Fnaf 2, Fnaf 3, Fnaf 4, Sister Location (5), Freddy Fazbear's Pizzeria Simulator and Fnaf World (Yeah, it's not horror. It contains cute robotic animals). And this game has a very interesting backstory. In 1987. a little boy was bitten by Fredbear, fallen in a coma and later died. A few weeks later, a purple shirt man killed five children, and put their dead bodies into the robots. The kids' souls are imprisoned inside the robots. They felt revenge, and they became evil machines. They wanna kill the purple guy ( and all nightguards). Years later the souls escaped from the animatronics, and they avenged themselves. They attacked the Purple guy, and he’s hidden in a a bunny suit. Yeah, but there was a little problem with the springs, and the robot crushed the man. So the game is simple and easy: check the lights and the cameras, close the doors, and stay away from the robotic killers. I hope you guys will enjoy this game. And this isn't the end of my writing. But it's a bit long, so I try to make the second part later.

See you soon!"

so I’ll try to post the second part later.

so I will post the second part later/separately.

so I’ll keep the second part for an other post.