Ebben a szövegben ha van akkor mi a hiba? (angol)

A spinner it mit jelent?

Az egeszet at kell irni, az egesz helytelen.

a spinner gondolom pörgős lenne,de ilyen szó nincs,inkább fast-paced.

megpróbálom nem átfogalmazni

de azt mondom ha valamit nem tudunk helyen megfogalmazni,akkor próbáljuk máshogy/egyszerűbben

The film is about Henry who is an excellent student in his graduation year/final year in high school.

az a baj,hogy a graduate student már felsőoktatásban tanul.

a szóismétlés miatt nem írtam az,de a between helyett among kell ha több dolog közül "választunk".és akkor lehetne "excellent among graduating students"

But before Henry write a big test , try it smoke one weed cigarette with "friend".

But before writing an important(a big nekem fura itt) test,Henry tries out smoking weed with a friend.

but the high school is having a drug test the next day.

"is having" mert bár jövő,de biztosan bekövetkezik,konkrét ideje van (the next day)

"the next day" a tommorrow helyett,mert nem a mai napra vonatkoztatjuk,mivel ez egy sztori.

"the school was a bakery shop",itt nem tudom mire gondolsz.a suliban ezt oktatják,vagy van egy pékségük?

mindenesetre csak simán bakery.

"they called the police" kik? talán itt jobb lenne a passzív

the police were called and they found something was not right about the headmaster,so in the end it was him who was taken away.

(a police-os mondatra jöhet valami javaslat)

My favourite movie is “High School” because it is very funny and a blast.

In a nutshell, the film is about, Henry who has achieved the highest academic rank in his graduating class.

Before delivering his farewell speech, he decided to have a joint with his stoner friend. Unfortunately, the principal decides to run a random drug test on the very same day. Henry knows in order to keep his scholarship, he must be clean. So he comes up with the odd idea to steal some weed from a drug dealer and uses it to spike the cookies in the bakery shop, to make the entire school high.

The principal calls the police. Things get even weirder as during the investigation, the police uncover some pretty strange things about the headmaster and it is him who is taken away.