Októberben megyek ECL angol B2 nyelvvizsgára. Valaki hozzáéertő meg tudná nézni a levelemet, hogy megfelel-e a szintnek? (Meg ha azt is meg tudja mondani, hogy hány pont)
Dear Manager,
Reference: My problems with the market’s shop assitants.
I am writing to complain about the shop assistants gruff behaviour. Two days ago I decided that I buy a new phone, and I did not think about where would I buy it, because I have bought a lot of products in your market.
Today I was in the market and I did not have any idea about what kind of phone should I buy. For this reason I requested a shop assistant let me help. First time she was kind and helpful, but when her phone was ringed she walked away and left me alone. Ten minutes later she came back, and obviously I asked her why did she leave me? Afterwards she became very harsh and mean and she started shout with me.
I thought she probably had a bad day, but I was especially angry when the second assistant behaved similar. I asked him about the phone's technical quality, but she told me: You can not see? There are the technical qualities, you are fool!”
For this reasons I request you speak to them, as I remember their names are Suzy and Joey.
I was hurt so much by their. In the future if I have any kind of situations I will have to buy in another market in the future.
Yours faithfully,
Gergő .....
(A .... a végén a vezetéknevem, csak nem akartam ide leírni, és 1 hibát már észre is vettem nem this hanem these, de már utólag nem javítok bele.)
Today almost everyone have mobile phone, because it is indispensable. We use it for phone calls, writing SMS, or what do we want. But people use it too much and this is not good for social life.
Basically there are many advantages that we use phone. As I said the phones are indispensable and very useful. We use phone when we are in danger or we had an accident. We can talk the emergency call. The other reason why mobile phones are useful is we can talk or chat with our relatives or friends who live in abroad and without phone we can't keep in touch with them.
Unfortunately there are also many disadvantages, for example if we use the social media on our phone without stop we can easily become dependent. Actually there are a lot of accident because people used phone during driving or they used on the bicycle. Please be careful! The further disadvantage is if we use phone in unsuitable situation, we can easily look rude.
Finally, as I see it mobile phones are very useful if we use correctly and we use with limits.
(Blog entry, Mobile phones)
Az elsőt olvastam csak, ennyire van türelmem.
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shop assistants' gruff...
I did not think about where I would buy it - figyelj oda, mert ezt a szórend hibát többször is elköveted
I had bought a lot of products before
Nem értem, miért a market szót használod mindig. A bolt az shop (GB) vagy store (US).
what kind of phone I should buy (szórend megint)
requested a shop assistant to help (vagy I asked a shop assistant for help)
when her phone rang...
I asked her why she had left me.
started to shout at me
behaved similarly
technical quality - szerintem a tulajdonságokra gondolsz, az specifications.
A második eladó férfi, tehát:
...but he asked me: "Can't you see them?" Then said: "The specifications are there, you are fool."
for these reasons I request you to speak...
as far as I can remember...
hurt so much by them
...I will choose another shop.
Akkor nézzük a másodikat:
Az everyone, bár nem csak egy embert jelent, mégis úgy viselkedik, mintha egyes számú lenne. Tehát "everyone haS" (vö: all peopled have)
SMS helyett texts - gyakrabban használják, rendesen lehet többes száma
What do we want helyett whatever we want
Their social life inkább? Nem tudom, olyan furán hangzik...
Basically-t inkább akkor használd, ha valamit már egyszer kifejtettél, most csak összefoglalod/ismétled. Így, hogy pro-kontra érveket hozol fel az on one hand/on the other hand a klasszikus, de akár el is hagyhatod.
Advantages to using a phone
Said után vessző, nincs the
We use a phone, (our) phones
...or when we had...
We can call/talk to/reach the emergency services
...is that we can talk...
...who live abroad...
...without a phone...
Új bekezdés elején on the other hand, however növeli a szöveg koherenciáját.
...disadvantages; for example... - a pontosvessző helyes használatától a javító tanárok el fognak ájulni
Nem kell névelő a social media elé
Dependent helyett inkább addicted - nem úgy függsz tőle, hogy ad neked valamit, ami máshol nem érhetsz el, hanem inkább úgy, mint a drogfüggőség
Actually írásba nem annyira megy.
There are a lot of accidents caused by people using their phones while driving or riding a bicycle.
A further disadvantage is that...
...a phone/our phones/phones...
...in an unsuitable situation/in unsuitable situations...
Finally helyett in conclusion, to sum it up, to conclude, stb
...if we use them correctly and within limits.
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