Átnéznétek az angol fogalmazásom? Véleményt is elfogadok, mert nyelvvizsgára készülök.

Ahol nagy hiba van:

I dont agree TO (agree with) the statement above because eating in restaurantE (nincs e) is very expensive for lot of family nowadays. In my view if you have enough time YOU (alanyod már van ide "to" kell) cook at home BECAUSE (nem mert kell, mert az okozat jön, ez akkor működne ha a tagmondatok így néznének ki: "you can save up money beacuse you cook at home") you can save your money and you can make healthy foods for your family. Even you CAN BUYING (nem, csak nem..) with your child or your husband. If your kids help FOR (help with something vagy help somebody)you in cooking at kitchen then they HAVE LEARNT (nem passzol a mondat első felének igeidejéhez) VERY GOOD COOKING (nagyon pongyola). Of course, FROM INDEPENDENT (gondolom az az "ettől függetlenül" magyar kifejezés lenne de azt nem így használják angolul, akkor már inkább Neverthless vagy vmi..) some people choose the faster and the more convenient opportunities so they DOESNT WANT cook at home because they are lazy and siply wealthy.

Én így csinálnám:

I don't agree with the statement above, because eating in a restaurant is (could be jobb lenne) very expensive for most of the families. I belive if you have enough time you should cook at home so you can both save your money and make healthy foods for your family at the same time. You can even go grocery shopping with your children or your husband. Furthermore if your kids help you in the kitchen they might learn some cooking skills. However some people will always choose the faster and more convenient way so they don't have to cook for themselves because they are lazy or wealthy eanough..

#5, csak ennyi hibad van:

believe

enough

healthy foods helyett meals-t irnek.

Es, for most of the families helyett

for most families