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Ref: A Letter about Hobbies and the Summer

Dear Nina,

We haven't talked since last year, and I'd like to ask a couple of things:

- How are you?

- How is your family? I know your Dad is ill and he was in the hospital. I hope he's going to heal soon.

- I heard you and Ian was breaking up. How do you bear it? Please let me know how I can help you.

I hope you don't mind answering my questions. Anyway, I'd like to say a few words about my new hobbies and what was happening in the summer.

In the first part of summer we were on a holiday in Hajdúszoboszló, where we swam, sunbathed a lot and we saw the attractions of the city.

In the middle of the summer me and my girlfriend were on holiday at Lake Balaton at a holiday resort called Fonyód. My girlfriend's family has an apartment there. We went to the BB days and we ate lot of candy-floss and we drank real fresh must. I think this was the best part of the summer.

In the end of the summer, I started to record videos (I've become a Youtuber), which actually means when I'm playing a game I record and share it on my Youtube channel. My target is to get 10 million subscribers. Now I've got 1 million. I usually play with survivor and action games like XY.

Lately, I have a lot to do, so I need a partner who can help me to record videos to be published on my channel. Who I had on my mind was you. So if you feel like it, you can join in, and we can do things together.

I hope we can meet in September and we can talk out everything in detail.

Take care,

Alen Walker

Dear Nina,

We haven't talked since last year. I have so many questions for you.

How are you? How is your family?

I know your dad is ill and was in hospital. I wish for him a speedy recovery and hope he gets well soon.

I also heard you and Ian were breaking up. I am sorry to hear it, hope you're coping well. If I can be of any help, please let me know.

I hope you don't mind my questioning but I have been thinking about you and trust that you are OK and life is treating you well.

A little bit about myself.

I have a new hobby and the summer was fun.

At the beginning of my holidays I visited Hajduszoboszlo. (Ki az a we?)

We swam, sunbathed and enjoyed the local tourist attractions.

In midsummer, my girlfriend and I went to Fon you, which is at Lake Balaton. My girlfriend's family own an apartment there we went to BB Days, ate a lot of candy Floss and drank must, (grape juice), freshly made from the harvested grapes.

For me, this was the highlight of this year's summer.

At the end of summer I started to work on my new interest. I record videos (I've become a YouTuber). I play games and I record them. I share them on my channel.

My aim is to acquire 10 million subscribers. So far, I have a million, still a long way to go. I usually play survivor and action games, such as XY.

Lately I'm busy, have a lot to do. I need a partner to help me to film my videos, those ones, which are to be uploaded onto YouTube.

Actually, I was thinking of you, would you be interested? If you think you'd like to join me, let me know, we could be involved in this together.

I hope we can meet up in September to discuss, brainstorm some ideas in greater details.

Take care,

Alan

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