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A 2005-ös feladatsort csináltam meg gyakorlásképp.

TASK A:

I've read your message and I think, I'm suitable for this work. I'm a 20-year-old student in Greenford. Can you tell me the kind of that dogs? I love every dogs, but it is an important information. I've other questions about the exact time, the length of the walks and the salary, so I believe, we should meet.

Helga

TASK B:

Traffic chaos in town on 15 March

Hi everyone,

May I bring to your attention, because that day wasn't a typical spring day. I think, there weren't springtime, which as cold as that.

At 6.00 am the snow was start falling. It was snowing heavily and some hours ago it blocked the roads. It was causing traffic chaos.

We was having subzero temperature and there were hard snowstorms. In the morning, the cars and buses got stuck in snowdrifts, for this reason the trains and buses lated 30-40 minutes. Later, the driving became impossible, that's why, all the shops and schools were closed at about 9.00 am.

It was horrible for the people, because lots of them were in the blocked roads or at home and they couldn't go out.

Fortunately, the rescue teams were arrived at 9.30 am and helped to the people, who ran into trouble.