Helyes így a tartalom?

L. R. phoned S. A. (nem kell to)because he had seen two people, a man who was taking photographs (olyan nincs, hogy taked) and a woman who was writing (3. alak nincs have nélkül) in a notebook next to R's gate. The next night S.A. and S.S. were guarding the house for R. (preserve az konzerválni) They saw (megint nem lehet 3. alak egyedül, ide 2. kell, múlt idő) 2 people: a man who was climbing over the gate (éppen mászott, amikor látták)(ha már bemászott, akkor had climbed) and a woman who was standing by the car. The man opened the window near the door. (Melyik man? Az, amelyik mászott? Akkor a had climbed lesz a nyerő)S.S. and S. A. handcuffed him, but he wasn't a burglar. (Olyan nincs, hogy didn't was! Vagy did vagy was!) Ha was L. R.