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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in response/with regard to (eleg az egyik) your advertisement which appeared IN THE JOB magazine IN MARCH.

I would like to apply for the POSITION of RECEPTIONIST. I GOT a degree IN tourism AT THE University of Budapest in 2011. HOWEVER, I WAS WORKING in tourism WHILE I was a student, AS I TOOK part-time jobs. The most important job for me was in Britain, where I WORKED AS A RECEPTIONIST in the famous London Hotel last summer for three monthS. I think I HAVE got lots of experience in tourism. I HAVE ALWAYS BEEN interested in tourism and the American culture, SO it would be A GREAT POSSIBILITY for me to work in A foreign country. Furthermore, I would like to work IN FULL-TIME, because I HAVE HAD only part-time jobS SO FAR. In addition, I would like to reach A higher level in my English knowledge, so (THAT IS WHY, szerintem belerakhatod) I would like to work in North-America.

I hope that you these references WILL BE TAKEN INTO CONSIDERATION and I WILL BE grantED the opportunity of an interview. I look forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully,

XY

I hope that you these references WILL BE TAKEN INTO CONSIDERATION

itt a YOU nem kell, veletlenul benne hagytam. bocsi

I think I HAVE got lots of experience in tourism. I HAVE ALWAYS BEEN interested in tourism. Itt ismetles van, esetleg irhatnad igy:

I HAVE ALWAYS BEEN interested in tourism and I think I have got lots of experience in this field.