Leellenőriznétek nekem a fogalmazást? (kb.80 szó)

I hope you can help me with THE problem I have ( vagy esetleg with my problem).

I am afraid of spiders and snakes (az elé nem kell a THE)

When I see THESE animals...

A nightmares -es mondatba megint nem kell a főnevek elé a the.

Szerintem így már nagyjából jó lesz:)

Dear Dr Broadbent,

I hope you can help me with a problem of mine. I'm scared of spiders and snakes. I'm afraid that I've arachnophobia. It must have developed when I was a child.

What do you think? When I look at these creatures I start screaming, my heart is racing and I start sweating and trembling. Sometimes, I have nightmares of them. What should I do? I want to overcome my fret.

I'm waiting for your reply.

Thank you for your time,

Angelica