Angol szakértők, nyelvtanárok, oktatók, felsőfokú nyelvvizsgával rendelkezők válaszát várom. Szerintetek mennyire helytelen ez a fogalmazás?

A stílus valóban eléggé "gyerekes".

Ami a nyelvtant illeti, nem sok helyes mondatot olvastam, azok is elég rövidek voltak. Tipikus hiba:

- beágyazott kérdésnél rossz szórend: "you just need to choose what would you like to do." Ez ugye what you would like to do. Ez a másik: Do you know which month are you coming yet?

- igeidók se jók sokszor

- rossz szavak

- helyesírási hiba: zoos, nem zoo's

- egyéb, pl. Hungary's worth's seeing, nem to see

Nincs időm részletesen kijavítani, de van bőven hiba. Azonban a stílus is nehézkes, rövid, hasonló mondatok következnek egymás után.

I’m glad to hear you’re coming to Hungary. It’s been a long time we met. Do you know when do you come? Because, you know, there are four seasons in Hungary: spring, summer, autumn and winter. So if you opt for the summer you should bring swimsuits or bikini, and things you need in the summer, because we’re going to visit Lake Balaton. Have you ever heard of it? It’s the biggest lake in Europe, it’s very beautiful, and is also known as ’The Hungarian Sea”. What's more, we will be able to visit the zoo, and we can go for a cruise by ship. Of course, there are many things we can do, you just need to choose whatever want to. But, if you choose wintertime, you’ll need many things, too. I know there’s no winter in your country, so you don’t really know what you'll need. Therefore, I've set up a list for you. You’ll need a coat, scarf, cap, gloves, sweatshirt, warm jumpers, trousers and warm socks. The winter programs are more exciting than that of the summer. We can go ice-skating, skiing and, if it’s snowing then we can go to sledge and we can raise a snowman or through snow balls.

Okay, I've discussed the plans just enough. Let’s talk about the journey itself. You have to visit the embassy and apply for a visa.

It’s going to take a long time until your plane lands, and I think, there’s no direct flight to Hungary. But please don’t worry. Hungary is worth visiting.

If you have any question, feel free to ask me. I’m here to reply every one of your questions.

I’m waiting for you reply.

Love,