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Tehát a feladat: You're going to leave your digs and would like to get accommodation in the student hostel. Write a letter to the manager.

-Start your letter with your personal data

-Describe your request

-Provide your reasons

-Mention why you need an early reply.

Amit eddig írtam:

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is XY and I am a 16 year-old secondary school student in Budapest. I am writing to you in order to ask for accommodation in the student hostel.

The reason why I am looking for a place to stay is because the flat I used to rent is about to be sold.

I am waiting for your early reply because I will have to leave my flat in a short time and I would like to consider all the available possibilities. Thanking you in advance for your time and assistance.

Yours sincerely,

XY

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