Angol remtortenetet, vagy valami ilyesmit kell irjak de hogy?

Pl így kezdheted:

Jane was sitting in her sofa on a cold November night. Nobody else was there with her... It was dark outside, it seemed calm but suddenly she heard a noise. It sounded just as if someone was walking outside.

És így folytatod a történetet és beleékeled a többi megadott részeket.

Jane was sitting in her sofa on a cold November night. Nobody else was there with her... It was dark outside, it seemed calm but suddenly she heard a noise. It sounded just as if someone was walking outside. She heared a dog barking.

Some minutes later somebody was knocking at the door. Jane didn't dare to open it. Then the door opened and someboday was going downstairs. Jane was very frightened.

Then somebody opened the door of her room. There stood a very tall men wering black cloak. When Jane swa his face, she screamed. He didn't have a nose and his teeth were black. The man entered the room and killed Jane. Then his dog ate her.

Benne vannak, csak kicsit átalakítva.

Ha az eredeti mondatokat irtam volna, úgy nagyon hülyén hangzott volna.