Angol hivatalos levél. Vajon jó ez így?

A My name is xyz and... után az I am az i az nagy betű.

Nem olyan régóta tanulom a nyelvet, szóval a többi részét nem nagyon tudom értelmezni nyelvtanilag, de ezt tudom.

Dear Mr Xy, -fontos a vessző

My name is abc and I am a BA student of Corvinus etc in Budapest, Hungary. I am getting ready to grafuate/ I am getting ready for graduation and I have begun to write my degree work. My topic is:.....

Unfortunatelly, in Hungary this topic is very limited because it can only be found in articles such as US campaign projects and I need trustful sources gor my research.

I would be very grateful you could recommend any books or any official, trustful sources that could make my work better, I would really loved to end with a summa cum laude.

Yours Sincerely,

xyz

Hat ez a level egy 10 eves gyerek szintjen van.

Dear Mr Xy,

My name is xyz. I am currently a BA student at the Corvinus University in Budapest, Hungary.

I am preparing for graduation and began to write my degree paper. My theme is “Donald Trump’s Campaign Under the Microscope”.

Unfortunately, available written information and references are limited in Hungarian on this topic.

I would be grateful if you could recommend any books or any other useful resources.

I am aiming to graduate with highest distinction.

Yours Sincerely,

xyz