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It was a warm summer morning. Me and my family were very frustrating, because we moved to other house. We were all day packing in the car. I was very excited. Me and my brother helped my mother to packing.
I was very tired. I was holding a box, and I was want gaved my mother. But unluckily, the box suddenly slipd out my hands, and I dropped the box, and I acrossed my feet. It was hurting so much. We were go to the hospital with car. The doctor sayd I was broked my feet. He gaved me bandage for my feet. We were go home.
After then we were looked the box inside and there was a broked TV. It was very akwarding. Finally I was relaxing when my family were packing.
frustrating = idegesítő
Szerintem inkább idegest akartál írni, ami frustrated.
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moved to another house
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We were packing in the car all day (szórend)
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helped my mother to pack (to nélkül is jó)
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and I wanted to give it to my mother
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slipped out of my hands
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acrossed my feet: ezt nem értem
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It hurt so much. (Nem használjuk folyamatosban.)
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We went to the hospital by car.
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The doctor said I had broken...
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He gave me a bandage...
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We went home.
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Then we looked inside the box and there was a broken TV.
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