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I think that education is a really important think in our life. When you want to do well what you love you have to learn it.In my view in the high-school you get a general knowledge ,but you need a higher aducation. I agree that degree is essential for the job. People can fint easier job with a degree. I don't agree that university is a waste of time. It is a good way to learn about yourself and learn about other people, And it is the best way to enjoy your young adult life. Of course there are disadvantages.It costs a lot of money and maybe you have to leave your town if the university is in another city.Despite the disadvantages I want to ho to the university and learn more about my favorite subjects.To my mind with degree you can find a better or a better paid job