Hogy helyes ez angolul:My friend took her bike and I want to tried but I feel on and some child in the park laught for me than I decedid I will learn to ride the bike. Only a year later I was on a bike race and I win the competition?

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One of my friends took her bike and I wanted to try it, but i fell off, so same child laughed at me. I decided to learn how to ride a bicyle. Only a year later I was on a bike race and I won the competition.

Hú barátom, nagyon sok mindent helyre kell magadban tenni...

Mielőtt bármit írok megjegyezném, hogy a magyar "mondat" sem éri el az elégséges szintent :)

A friend of mine brought her bike that I wanted to try out, but I fell off it. Many children from the park were laughing at me. Than I deicided to learn how to ride a bike. One year later I went to a bike race which I won.