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The man who can't be moved

There was a man who was living in happiness with his girlfriend. One day she left him. He went back to THE corner where he first saw her. He made a tent. There was a picture in his had, it was saying: "If you see this girl, tell here where I am"

Some people tried to hand him money. They thought that he was homeless.

He didn't MOVE, because he thought he needs to stay even if it rains or snowS, because if she changes her mind this is the first place she will go TO. The man became famous and the girl saw him in the news. She ran to the corner, and they reconciled. (Szerintem jobb lenne: they got together again. A reconcile inkább baráti, illetve veszekedés utáni kibékülés, itt pedig nincs róla szó, hogy veszekedés lett volna).

They are (én inkább were-t írnél, de ez nem nyelvtan) living in happiness again.