Valaki segítene nekem? Angol fogalmazásba.

Nem pontos fordítás, kihagytam,hozzátettem,kicsit átírtam :D de remélem azért vmit tudok segíteni:D

Yesterday I was walking to my friend. Suddenly, a man appeared from the bush. He was following me. I was very frightened. I was running to my friend's house, and I told her that someone was following me. We phoned the police. They came,but they didn't find him. It has been a mystery for me,who was the man.

az elsőé jó, csak az a baj, hogy csak egyszerű mondatokból áll, és nem hangzik nagyon jól...

Yesterday, while I was walking to my friend's house, somebody suddendly appeared from the bush. I didn't know who he was and I soon realized that I was being followed. I got really scared and ran until I reached my friend's house, where I told her about that weird man and we decided to call the police. They didn't find that man and for me, it's still a mystery who he was.

ja, egyébként az én fordításom sem nagyon pontos, de kb ugyanaz, csak egy picit még csavartam rajta (már a megfogalmazáson) pl.: I soon realized that I was being followed. = szinte rögtön rájöttem, hogy követnek.

csak kb ilyen változtatások voltak, úgyhogy remélem jó lesz és remélem segítettem!

14/L

Yersterday I was on my way to my friend's house. I was walking and someone appeared from a bush. I got really scared. I didn't know who it was. I ran until my friend's house and told her that someone was following me. We called the police, but they couldn't find anyone. It's still a mystery to me, who this person was.

ez jó :) fordítónak nem szabad hibáznia;)