SÜRGŐS! Angol házimban kijavítanátok a hibákat? Holnapra kell :S

A legjobb barátomról kellett fogalmazást írni és jegyet is kapunk rá. Légyszi javítsátok ki a hibákat! Mit írnátok máshogy? Esetleg miről lehetne még írni? (kellene még pár mondat)

Előre is nagyon köszönöm =)

My best friend

My best friend is ****. Her nickname is ****. We first met when we were 3 years old.

She lives in **** with her parents and her two older brothers. We went to the same kindergarden, then she was my classmate for 8 year and went to an aerobics together 2 years. She is very short. She has got a brown eyes and long light-brown hair. She wears glasses. She is a cute, kind and funny girl. She likes the animals. Her favourite animal is lion, becdause it's big, strong and cruel but tenged and caring, too. And she's horoscope is a lion. She has got a dog, three cats, and two guinea-pig. Her favourite subject are Biology and History. She students at *** (iskola neve). She likes listening to music, shopping, reading, writing a poem, playing with her pets, drawing etc. Her favourite flower is tulip. Her favourite color is red, beause it is possible to express many emotions with him: love, desire, fury etc.

We trust each other. I can always talk to her about my proglems. She always listens and then gives me good advice. I hope I do the same for her. We usually talk every day.