Helyes ez így? Ha van benne hiba mi az?

Van egy angol verseny a suliban és az a feladat hogy írjunk egy 130-180 szavas történetet a pulykáról.

Hey Joe -says the cock –Yeah? –i said

-It’s here the time again. –Yeah. Two years ago my father, one year ago my mother and nowI follow them. –But do you know that you’ll kill there? –What? –Yesss. Your parents isn’t live there. They died there. –oh no. You want to just scare me. –No. –I’ll see it. –oh-oh. There is a man who came for you. Bye.

The man take me to home and put me at roost. –ooohh it’s a cute hous. I think I’ll live here in happy. I hope. –Here I met a dog who was loughing.

-Why do you loughing? –I asked him. –Why? –Asked –Because you’re so happy. –Is it a big problem? –Yess. –Why? –Because after the harvest you will death. They will roast you then you give a pretty ribbon and after these they will serve you with mayflower. So you haven’t got escape. –Why are they do this? –Because they are pilgrims and it’ their tradition.

-Good luck turkey. Once we’ll meet again. Bye. –Bye.