Kellene egy kis segitség. Valaki segitene megnézni a hibáimat?

"Hairdresser, movie star, cosmetics, teacher …"

A "cosmetics" helyett a "cosmetician" kellene!

Szerintem ennyi.

Hello everyone. My name is Csilla. I’m __ years old. Future is very important to everyone. A little from always asking (Nem értem, mit akartál írni): What will you be when you grow up? ? Hairdresser, movie star, cosmetician, teacher …. But what interests me? Singing! I sing in the morning, noon and night. My parents often do not like it, but I am like that. I am going to music school since I was 8 years old to learn singing, and I participate in different types of competitions. If I want to finish high school is such a college and hopefully on Hungary (Ezt sem értem). When I will successfully complete the college, all my dream is to be a popular singer. But of course, there are about singing (Ezt sem értem...) at the age of 26 I would like to marry a loving man, and of course I want two children. I definiately want the kids to have a good financial background because it does not go without it.

Unfortunately, it is easy to write and succeed in many things to be done (Ezt sem értem). I would like to be successful sooner or later.

Ha még aktuális, leírhatnád magyarul a mondatokat, amikre nem jöttem rá mit akarnak jelenteni :D